Fri Dec 18, 2009 5:50 am
This looks to me like a good base for a foreign extra stout, with lots of extra "kitchen-sink" ingredients thrown in on top of it. A few things, similar to what Tristan mentioned above:
1) Too much dark malt. Get rid of either the chocolate malt, or the Carafa II. Your choice.
2) Swap the bittering and flavor hop additions. Either use Saaz for your finishing, or better yet, throw out the Saaz altogether. Its very delicate character will be entirely covered up by the dark malt. Think of Saaz as the wimpiest hop in the world -- it truly is. To get really good character out of Saaz, you either need to use it in a very wimpy beer, or you need to use a metric assload of it.
3) Get rid of the Carapils. I feel it is 95% worthless, ESPECIALLY if you are simultaneously adding sugar as you are in this recipe. Which do you want -- SLIGHTLY fuller body from the Carapils, or improved attenuation from the sugar? Pick one.
Good luck, on whatever you decide. Whatever you make, it is certain to be awesome, as you have a very good base recipe here.
Dave
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